REVIEW OF MY POEM-SOMETHING I LOOK AT-65
Thanks and gratitude to eminent poet and literary critic Prof Cijo Joseph Chennelil for writing a beautiful critical appreciation on my poem SOMETHING I LOOK AT-65.Thank you very much sir for your wonderful words
Smurtiji,
Your poem titled"Something I Look At 65"is a poem that narrates an evergreen love affair that never fades away or withers out,in fact it does have an enduring and endeavouring impact,that teenage love still creates myriad emotions of joy and happiness in the interiors of the interiors of the heart,the freshness of that amorous play is still retained,the exchanges of letters,waiting in the bus stops,in the first encounter in the corridors of the school building and the first occasion of falling in love are adequately and aptly described in the poem,even now when that sensation of love is looked at,the same feelings,emotions and sentiments are aroused.Kudos to you for composing such a well-versed poem.
Cijo Joseph Chennelil Kuravilangad.All Copyrights Reserved@On 9th March 2018.
SOMETHING I LOOK AT-65
BY-SMRUTI RANJAN MOHANTY
Oh my teen-age love!
you are still in me with all your flavour
that raining sound in the distant forest
and long wait at the bus stop
that pink envelope
hide and seek on the terrace
to have a glimpse of yours
those speaking eyes and rosy lips
that naughty smile and graceful gait
even today i feel
The day I met you in the school corridor
i lost me to you forever
that single encounter made me feel
i am for you and you are for me
just made for each other
Under the captivating spell of love
we flourished and developed
never paid any heed
to what people said
years passed, everything around changed, but our love for each other remained the same
The moments in all their colours
are very much alive
even today when i look at you
i see the same teen age beauty
coming rushing to me with all her love
and life manifesting its true colour and grandeur once more
copyright@smrutiranjan28.2.2018
Smurtiji,
Your poem titled"Something I Look At 65"is a poem that narrates an evergreen love affair that never fades away or withers out,in fact it does have an enduring and endeavouring impact,that teenage love still creates myriad emotions of joy and happiness in the interiors of the interiors of the heart,the freshness of that amorous play is still retained,the exchanges of letters,waiting in the bus stops,in the first encounter in the corridors of the school building and the first occasion of falling in love are adequately and aptly described in the poem,even now when that sensation of love is looked at,the same feelings,emotions and sentiments are aroused.Kudos to you for composing such a well-versed poem.
Cijo Joseph Chennelil Kuravilangad.All Copyrights Reserved@On 9th March 2018.
SOMETHING I LOOK AT-65
BY-SMRUTI RANJAN MOHANTY
Oh my teen-age love!
you are still in me with all your flavour
that raining sound in the distant forest
and long wait at the bus stop
that pink envelope
hide and seek on the terrace
to have a glimpse of yours
those speaking eyes and rosy lips
that naughty smile and graceful gait
even today i feel
The day I met you in the school corridor
i lost me to you forever
that single encounter made me feel
i am for you and you are for me
just made for each other
Under the captivating spell of love
we flourished and developed
never paid any heed
to what people said
years passed, everything around changed, but our love for each other remained the same
The moments in all their colours
are very much alive
even today when i look at you
i see the same teen age beauty
coming rushing to me with all her love
and life manifesting its true colour and grandeur once more
copyright@smrutiranjan28.2.2018
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