REVIEW OF MY POEM A LOOK AT LIFE-55
Thanks and gratitude to eminent poet and literary critic Prof Cijo Joseph Chennelil for writing a beautiful critical appreciation on my poem A LOOK AT LIFE -55. Thank you very much sir for your wonderful words of appreciation.
Smrutiranjanji,
Your poem titled"A Look at Life-55(I Am in Love)"is a poem that gives thumbs up to that enduring and endeavouring life which never ages at any rate. The two enticing lovers are engaged in their engrossing, enthralling, captivating, riveting, alluring and regenerative love here with no strings attached whatsoever. This love is an evergreen love which never comes to a grinding halt. In fact, it goes on and on without any slackening and hesitancy. The love here that was initiated long back ago is still reverberating and reaching into its crescendo. The enchanting love transforms the individuals concerned here and their surroundings like never before. The physical erosion doesn't matter when the mind is focused upon that steadfast love. The physical signs of love get well entrenched here with the body experiencing that acute feel good factor every now and then. The love that is picturised here is everlasting and unending. In fact, it is eternal. The fragrance of love is a reality which can not be wished away very easily. In fact, it surges ahead in spite of all barriers, boundaries, constraints and restrictions. The true love that flows from the heart can not experience any depreciation, degeneration and decadence. This love transcends above all limitations and shortcomings. Let this love of unique and resplendent perspective reach its culmination in a perfect and accurate manner.Kudos to you for composing such a poem of remarkable intensity about love.
Cijo Joseph Chennelil.All Copyrights Reserved@On 14th October 2018.
A LOOK AT LIFE-55
BY-SMRUTI RANJAN MOHANTY
I AM IN LOVE
for a change
we just looked at each other
and the rest is history
life unfolded its beauty like never before
we are in love once more
how soon everything changed
and the world became so beautiful and fascinating once again
i looked at you
you are the same, no signs of ageing, no wrinkles, no black spots,
i could see nothing, only sense that ageless heart beating for the sake of love
those beautiful eyes, dancing dimples, rosy cheeks, quivering lips, drooping eyes and inviting gestures telling me
it is not all over
still, there is enough in us
to captivate each other for years together
love is always in its youth
love never grows old, it is as it was
much before when we first fell in love
we don't feel it, feel its warmth and beauty because we never look at it
the way we used to look at it
life is all about finding that love
rediscovering the moments
and passion for each other
life is living gracefully
falling in love with one's love
falling in love with oneself
and life again and again
irrespective of the situation
and its constraints
my love!
truth is in front of me, in my eyes
truth is in front of you, in your eyes
let nothing come in between
i and you, we and our love
and let us live life in love and passion
till we are here
©smrutiranjan 30.9.2018
All rights reserved
Smrutiranjanji,
Your poem titled"A Look at Life-55(I Am in Love)"is a poem that gives thumbs up to that enduring and endeavouring life which never ages at any rate. The two enticing lovers are engaged in their engrossing, enthralling, captivating, riveting, alluring and regenerative love here with no strings attached whatsoever. This love is an evergreen love which never comes to a grinding halt. In fact, it goes on and on without any slackening and hesitancy. The love here that was initiated long back ago is still reverberating and reaching into its crescendo. The enchanting love transforms the individuals concerned here and their surroundings like never before. The physical erosion doesn't matter when the mind is focused upon that steadfast love. The physical signs of love get well entrenched here with the body experiencing that acute feel good factor every now and then. The love that is picturised here is everlasting and unending. In fact, it is eternal. The fragrance of love is a reality which can not be wished away very easily. In fact, it surges ahead in spite of all barriers, boundaries, constraints and restrictions. The true love that flows from the heart can not experience any depreciation, degeneration and decadence. This love transcends above all limitations and shortcomings. Let this love of unique and resplendent perspective reach its culmination in a perfect and accurate manner.Kudos to you for composing such a poem of remarkable intensity about love.
Cijo Joseph Chennelil.All Copyrights Reserved@On 14th October 2018.
A LOOK AT LIFE-55
BY-SMRUTI RANJAN MOHANTY
I AM IN LOVE
for a change
we just looked at each other
and the rest is history
life unfolded its beauty like never before
we are in love once more
how soon everything changed
and the world became so beautiful and fascinating once again
i looked at you
you are the same, no signs of ageing, no wrinkles, no black spots,
i could see nothing, only sense that ageless heart beating for the sake of love
those beautiful eyes, dancing dimples, rosy cheeks, quivering lips, drooping eyes and inviting gestures telling me
it is not all over
still, there is enough in us
to captivate each other for years together
love is always in its youth
love never grows old, it is as it was
much before when we first fell in love
we don't feel it, feel its warmth and beauty because we never look at it
the way we used to look at it
life is all about finding that love
rediscovering the moments
and passion for each other
life is living gracefully
falling in love with one's love
falling in love with oneself
and life again and again
irrespective of the situation
and its constraints
my love!
truth is in front of me, in my eyes
truth is in front of you, in your eyes
let nothing come in between
i and you, we and our love
and let us live life in love and passion
till we are here
©smrutiranjan 30.9.2018
All rights reserved
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